Score: 4

"I think what they meant was"

submission: 3 Girls Dress-Up v1.1

date: September 14, 2004

Increase the size of the window in general, not just the women. You magnified the women, and thus missed the point entirely. Enhance the size of everything in the flash, and you will go far. The relatively realistic proportions of the women work nicely, just get more practice, and you will go far.

Score: 10

"Remind me not to stay near Hock"

submission: Rokémon!

date: September 14, 2004

Great job on this flash. The humor is hard to get if this is the first flash of your's someone is seeing, but very awesome all the same. I eagerly await the sequel, and hope to see more of your work.

Score: 10

"Incredible"

submission: I miss you Daddy

date: September 14, 2004

What a fine piece, one that captures the innocence of a child so perfectly. The art is good, but the sound could have been better. I had to turn up the speakers to understand the girl. But it is excellent, nontheless...this is one of the few flash able to reduce a grown man to tears out of sadness.

Score: 0

"You own no one"

submission: PICONJO OMG 9/11

date: September 12, 2004

I am not impressed with this flash...it is more about stroking your own ego than any coherent plot. Well, that, and an unhealthy obsession with one's netherregions. If you want to do 9/11 flash that is good, look at the 9/11 collection and the submission "I Love You Daddy."

You can do a lot better than this.

Score: 10

"Holy mother of God.."

submission: Pico's Unloaded

date: September 11, 2004

This is a masterpiece of flash animation. From the fluid animation, to the choice of music, right down to the attention to detail on the violence. I can't wait to see more from you.

Score: 8

"Only one complaint"

submission: EC_Breaking The Habit

date: September 7, 2004

You kinda cut the song short, but it was a great video. I think you could have done more with the story had you used the entire tune. I loved the video, and think the Invader ZIM style worked well for it :)

Score: 4

"You can do better than this"

submission: Foamy gets OWNED!

date: September 6, 2004

The best way to prove yourself is to do better. This looked like it was built in five minutes. You have good animation quality, but without a coherent story and a reason to kill Foamy, this just doesn't work. 2 out of 5 is the highest I can vote for this. You obviously have skill with flash, now apply it to make a better flash movie.

Score: 9

"Very awesome"

submission: Toads Rage 5 Trailer

date: September 6, 2004

You improve every time you make a flash. I am eager to see Toad lay down the law on the primadonna named Mario. I know it will be good. I for one would like to see Toad team up with an ally of some kind. Perhaps someone who has been as neglected in Video Games as he was. I'd like to see a woman kick some butt as well. Perhaps Zelda gets tired of being the kidnapped princess?

As for who should die next, I am not so sure. But go for someone annoying. I look forward to your next entry.

Score: 9

"I have a request for you"

submission: Super Mario: Toads Rage 4

date: September 2, 2004

Go forth and beat up other enemies from other video games. Perhaps have him beat up Ganon or Link, and maybe find an interest. You have a great series going, one that should have a rightful place among the Mario Parodies.

Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Frankenstein Project

date: September 1, 2004

The story follows the song nicely, but the song had problems with quality. The art was nice as well, but can be better.